If you’re FED UP with struggling to write your marketing copy, second-guessing yourself, and feeling frustrated
with your income
— then keep reading, because you’re minutes away from receiving
fast, affordable, objective feedback with personalized tips
that you can implement right away — from an experienced
marketing content strategist and copywriter, and
an expert at getting YOUR copy to convert higher.
Want to know why your web page isn’t
making you more money?
Are you guilty of hiding out and delaying your launch by endlessly tinkering with the copy or layout on your website, sales page or squeeze page under the pretense of making it perfect?
I get it. You put all that time, money and effort into your web page and it’s not even getting you the results you expected. I know how discouraging that can be. Unfortunately, I’ve heard it from quite a few clients.
The problem is that you happen to be at a great disadvantage here. This is one of those situations where you are simply too close to it to see it objectively and the chance that you can correct the problem is not very likely. As Einstein said,
“No problem can be solved with the same consciousness that created it.”
This is where an outsider, particularly someone who specializes in marketing and writring copy for coaches, can be of great help to you. Once I raise your consciousness about the problem, you will see that sometimes, it’s just a few tweaks that are needed — and suddenly, you have money coming in. That’s right, I’m talking about the ka-ching that happens while you’re sleeping, or busy doing other things.
As a marketing content strategist and conversion specialist:
I have laser vision when it comes to seeing the problem with your marketing page.
Over the past 20 years, I’ve managed thousands marketing projects responsible for hundreds of millions of dollars in advertising campaigns.
I know how to write compelling direct response copy and I know what good design looks like. Most importantly, I know what works and what doesn’t from a strategic marketing viewpoint. And now, you can take advantage of my expertise to help you make more money with a quick “Converting Copy to Cash”TM Hot Seat.
Or you can continue to struggle along leaving money on the table by doing it yourself.
You do it the hard way or the easy way — IT’S ALL UP TO YOU.
Hoping that you get it right or settling for “good enough” when just a few tweaks could change your results dramatically, just doesn’t make sense. When you think about it,
Hope is a very bad sales strategy.
You certainly don’t want to “bet the farm” on the slim hope that you get it right and get results. And obviously, your “good enough” isn’t. If you want more clients and more money and you are willing to give up your need to be right or be in control — you might want to listen up.
I’m not one to hold back. And I don’t just tease you with the beginning step or some vague concept and then tell you that you’ll have to pay more to get the meat. That’s not my style.
I’m known for giving away great content — and all my secrets. Why? Because my life’s purpose is to empower you. Honestly, making money is secondary to me. When I see something that can be improved, I believe it’s my obligation to tell you. So if you’re really attached to what you have and you are resistant to changing, this probably isn’t for you.
If you are open to hearing what a professional with over 20 years experience as an advertising manager and marketing conversion specialist has to say — sign up below for your “Converting Copy to Cash”TM Hot Seat. You’ll get all the insights, tweaks, tactics and tips to increase your results and grow your business. You will get the copy and design tips that will showcase your brilliance and make it easy for people to say ‘yes’ to you! Would you like to have more clients say ‘yes’ so you can make more money?
Or are you willing to let your endless tinkering keep you playing small?
If you will allow me the privilege of helping you — here’s what you will get:
I’ll review your formatted web page with you and show you exactly how I would tweak it to get higher conversions. This includes a content critique for your choice of one:
- Website Home Page
- Opt-in or Squeeze Page
- Sales Page
- Email or Website Ad
Still not convinced that this is what you need?
It has been brought to my attention that I can be a little too humble about my expertise in this area, and that doesn’t serve you — just as your not tooting your own horn doesn’t allow you to serve your clients effectively. I get it. It’s hard for us to do this for ourselves — but here goes:
Did you know that:
- I have consistently held 4 to 5 of the first 10 listings on page one of Google for the past 6 years for my top keywords?
- I get an average 77% click through rate from my squeeze page auto responder — when most people would KILL for even 30%?
This is what I want to do for you!
I know that what others say matters more to you than anything I can say about how much difference I can make in your business, so I’m going to share what a prospective client much like you said:
“Wow – what a difference 20 minutes can make! That’s how much time it took Beverly Bergman to make suggestions (in a free phone consultation, no less) on how I might improve the layout of my website. She recommended I move some pieces around to eliminate clutter and draw the reader’s eye to the main message. She wisely advised me to offer the testimonials for my book, Amazing Grays, in a more user-friendly way. She was spot on! There is more work to be done with keywords, but if she can make this much of a difference in such a short time – think what she can do with an hour! Check out her handiwork at www.maggiecrane.com.”
Author “Amazing Grays”
Do you even know how much money you are leaving on the table — all because you resist getting the help you need?
The key is — you have to know how to write the copy in a way that compels people to take the action you want them to take!
If you were an expert copywriter, you wouldn’t need me. But that’s not what your training or your expertise is in. Remember what Einstein said, “You cannot solve the problem with the same consciousness that created it.” If you’re like most people,
you don’t even know what you don’t know.
And you have no idea how much money you are leaving on the table.
“Based on hundreds of tests conducted, a good headline can be as much as 17 times more effective than a so-so headline. And this is with exactly the same body copy!”
Advertising direct marketing guru, Ted Nicholas
“On the average, 5 times as many people read the headlines as read the body copy. It follows that unless your headline sells your product, you have wasted 90% of your money.”
One of the world’s top advertising geniuses, David Ogilvy
Would it be worth it to invest $497 to have your ideal clients come to you and say:
“I already know I want to work with you.
I just want to know where to send the money?”
This is what 90% of my clients say to me. And that’s what I want for you.
Let’s say that those inquiries bring you 5 new clients a month. And let’s say each client is worth $1,200 a month to you. That’s $6,000 a month of income in addition to what you’re already bringing in. Not too shabby, right? That’s like being paid a $72,000 bonus annually! And, we haven’t even talked about how the right copy will attract your ideal clients – not those looky-loos who you would rather not work with.
What if everything you promoted from now on
converted at a higher rate?
So let me ask you, do you think it might be worth investing $497 to have me critique your copy?
“So grateful for the expertise and talents of Bev Bergman. I recently launched my new website, and needed an extra set of eyes to review my home page. After working on it for so long, I realized I was too close to it. Bev was quickly able to see things I couldn’t. She tightened it up, made it come alive, and have a greater impact. I love knowing that Bev can take my copy to another level so I can ultimately reach more people and give them the skills and tools they need to enjoy greater inner peace.”
Mary Allen, MCC
America’s Inner Peace Coach
How would you like to have clients pursuing you with
sales automatically rolling in — while you sleep?
I generally have had several people calling me every week telling me: “You don’t know me, but I read every word of copy on your website and I already know I want to work with you. I can see that you really get me and I know you’re the one, just based on your copy.”
Then I typically thank them and attempt to reinforce why I’m the right choice. And invariably, they stop me cold and say: “I don’t need to hear that. I already know I want to work with you. Just tell me the price.”
I’m not saying that to brag. I’m saying it because I understand the value of coaching (that’s why I chose to serve you) and I want to make that happen for you too, so that you can finally make the money you deserve.
Here are just a few of the things you will understand about how to approach your market after your session:
• What makes a winning headline and why
• How subtle tweaks can increase revenues
• How to set up any page so that it compels people to take action
• Which details you must include and which to leave out
• Why contact information on every site page is essential
Here’s how this easy, fast and affordable solution works:
Step #1 You complete and send me a short copywriting questionnaire for whatever marketing piece you’d like my input on: your ezine, website page, sales letter, advertising flyer, opt-in page, etc.
I will review your page ahead of time (unlike some marketers who critique your page on the fly.)
Step # 2 We will schedule a convenient appointment for me to review the page with you by screen sharing and I’ll give you specific suggestions for exactly how to change the copy and layout to be more strategic and effective — and get better results! This is a 1:1 private recorded conference call.
Step #3 You give the recording to your V.A. or designer to implement the changes and VOILA — you are done!
All this in less than 90 minutes of your time! Plus, you don’t have to go anywhere, it’s all done online. And all for just $497!
Fast, affordable, objective feedback with a list of tips you can implement right away — from a marketing content strategist and experienced copywriter who is an expert at getting copy to convert higher.
#1 “Converting Copy to Cash”TM Hot Seat
This is for single page content + layout tweaks with recording ready to give to your V.A. or designer.
Pay just $497.00.
#2 “Converting Copy to Cash”TM Ultra Hot SEO Copy Makeover
With this option, I will personally revise your single page content for you and then we’ll review it, the same as above. Plus you will receive a 45-minute follow-up consultation with me — to critique copy, write headlines, review your marketing funnel, plan a campaign, brainstorm to name a program or product, etc.
Full pay is just $997 – (I’d grab it now — before I realize what an insane value this is!)
If you’re unhappy with your site’s performance and don’t have the time, talent or interest to learn how to correct the copy yourself, you would be better off opting for the SEO copy makeover for higher conversions from an expert — because you are leaving more money on the table with each passing day! Simply apply for your makeover and have your page literally sell for you while you sleep!
If your website isn’t delivering new clients to you on a regular basis, primed and ready to sign up like mine does — I guarantee you there IS a solution. But nothing will change until you do.
Here’s how this is different from what you have already tried…
I know the right words to say to have more your ideal clients calling you,
already pre-sold on working with you.
I use charismatic conversational copy that does all the heavy lifting for you.
To increase your conversion rate from now on, just sign up here. You will receive a questionnaire with details I need in order to help you. Once I have reviewed it, you will be invited to schedule your content makeover appointment. You will get the most value if you submit a link to the already laid out page you want me to review with that application, but it’s not required.
My favorite quote is:
“The risks of no action are far greater than the risks of
President John F. Kennedy
I like to reward people who take decisive action because that shows me they are fully committed to getting all they can out of the opportunity — and that guarantees their success. So here’s an extra special super-duper bonus for you fast action takers:
Everyone who purchases the
“Converting Copy to Cash”TM Ultra Hot SEO Copy Makeover
will receive a complimentary ticket to
my next 2-day live marketing workshop:
“You Had Me at Hello!”
This is a 2-day live workshop with me teaching you how to have your clients saying “You Had Me at Hello!” so that you can finally stop doing so much networking and actually have copy that delivers more of your ideal clients on a silver platter and converts better for you. I will cover how to make sure you’re attracting your ideal clients by using the right keywords and what to say to get them to say “Yes!” to you during the live workshop to be held in Southern California (exact date and location to be announced soon!)
If You Have Read Nothing Else on This Page — Read This:
Having a qualified professional do a site assessment/review
is an ESSENTIAL piece to
making money from your website pages!
(It’s like wearing new running shoes for the first time when you run a marathon.
Don’t you want to KNOW they are going to go the distance before you start?)
Why is it essential? Because you are just too close to it to see it as others will. And if you are writing your own copy and doing your own design or have someone helping you with either of those things who does not understand copy and design from an expert’s marketing perspective (which not all designers and copywriters do), not only will you have wasted all the time and money you have spent so far, you are leaving tens of $1000’s on the table every year, maybe even every month.
I don’t understand why you would gamble with your life and your business like that.
If you think it’s good enough and don’t have someone who knows marketing scrutinizing your page, you are being foolish and playing Russian Roulette with your business, your livelihood, your family’s lifestyle and happiness and your fortune.
It’s not just a website or a sales page or an email.
This is about creating the path to financial security so
you can live your best life!
Look, you can spend thousands of dollars on becoming certified as a coach and then spend thousands more every year being coached yourself, taking courses, going to networking events, retreats, flying here and there to be seen and heard or to learn more — and if your website sucks — it’s all wasted time money! And it’s time you can never get back. So what are you waiting for?
Isn’t it worth $497 to finally be able to relax about your marketing and
enjoy all the fringe benefits of your page converting higher?
10 BIG Benefits, such as:
- Not having to go to so many networking events
- Having more time to do what you went into business to do
- Having clients pursuing you
- Knowing how to confidently respond when asked “What do you do?”
- Stop feeling stressed out about your marketing
- Stop playing small so you can fulfill your true purpose
- Stop squandering money on things you hope might help; but don’t really
- Stop worrying about your financial security
- Attract your ideal clients who are willing to pay you more, so that you can
- Enjoy the freedom in your business and your life more
All for $497? That sounds crazy low to me!
Why would you spend tens of $1000’s on all of those things I mentioned above, and then stop short of the the last $497 to ensure it’s all going to work effectively? I’ll bet many of you have spent at least $50,000 on those things above in the last 3-5 years, only to cheap out on the most critical piece of all. Making sure it works!
Not convinced yet?
If you’re really serious about helping more people and making more money,
I challenge you to put your money where your mouth is by
making this tiny investment in your future.
Let’s get the right offer out there and make it convert much higher with a little help from your friend, the Queen of Copywriting and marketing content strategist/conversion specialist for owners of service-based businesses just like yours.
You do agree, you’re worth it — don’t you?
Seeing infinite success for you,
P. S. I think you know me by now and you know that I write and teach the authentic heart-based copy that is the new paradigm, the way people want to be approached now. I think you can see by this letter and all the content on my websites that I write copy that draws people in — and that’s precisely what I can do for you. The only catch is — you have to sign up to get it!
Plus, I’ve had several clients tell me that suddenly the light bulb goes on and they understand what to do— because of the way I explain things.
P.P.S. Admittedly, this sales page copy is a little more hard sell than I would normally write; and it’s only because I am SO passionate about helping you to help more people! I can easily see how to fix things you can’t see because you are simply too close to it. I have devoted the last 10 years of my life to supporting coaches just like you and to serving on the board of directors of the San Diego Professional Coaches Alliance (now as past president) so that you all could help more people, because I SO value what you do. Can you understand why it just breaks my heart that you won’t invest what could be the best $497 you have ever invested in yourself?